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[[原创地带]] Loading and Unloading

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发表于 2015-6-27 04:25:45 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I worked at a warehouse for a while. My daily job was to load/unload goods to/from containers. Actually it was not as hard as it sounded like, as generally the goods were not heavy and I could manage by myself. The only thing that troubled me was the air. It was usually dirty inside the container and the ventilation was not very good. So now and then I would sneak near the door where there was usually some leak to let the fresh air in. Only when the supervisor didn't see me.
Or he would say,\"Go back to work.\" And I knew that I didn't even have the freedom of getting more fresh air.
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发表于 2015-6-27 10:42:11 | 显示全部楼层
If I were you, I'd prefer

1. ..., as generally the goods were... to ... generally the goods were...

2. ... sneak near the door... to ... sneak out (of) the door nearby ...

3. ...
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 楼主| 发表于 2015-6-27 21:16:47 | 显示全部楼层
感谢楼上指教!第一个as是想表示原因,不过又读了一下后似乎改成since好些,因为太多as了。第二句我的意思不是出门,而是在门边上,如果是out of the door就无所谓leak了
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